My final opinion on "Coercion" (Narrative)

I am very pleased with how "Coercion" looks now complete (to some degree). I have learned a lot from making it, both filming and editing, and it has motivated me to plan making more films over summer.

When I showed my lecturer my rough draft, he said I only needed to tweak a few things here and there and that he was impressed with my range of shots, which I was really happy about because that's what I was hoping he would say.

I do intend to reshoot some shots with the actors to get the film to a standard that I think is suitable for festivals, and it is because of this that I will not be uploading the film online (yet).